Dargquon Ql'deleodna

he hears here soft crying... and tries to scream out her name "Tessa...." he said gasping from his long run through the underbrush, bleeding from many thorns and branches. Exaustedly ...

yea, go kill sanska, your on the right track lady, keep it up, its kindof cool how they can track magic residue, sounds cool. i cant wait until they do ...

cool, a very well drawn guy standing ontop of the earth

wow, those are some really good pictures, i like the first and second one best, but as the other people said the third one is out of proportion, and the ...

replying in elven i said" hmm a little hostility eh, ohwell never expected much from you anyway, and just to let you know it would be very very hard to ...

it didnt have much rythm , but it was nice. it was quite selfcentered; although the spelling may have been wrong in quite a few places, it was fine other ...

thats some pretty good stuff for a 9 year old, tell her congradulations for me, were did she get the idea to write a story like this, its kinda depressing.

a briefcase is there weapon of preference if they get you, you might be in for a life-long sentence cute little poem you got there zel, i saw how the ...

this is good, it is just depressing, and doesnt seem to flow well, possibly if you rearanged some words or removed or changed some lines it would flow. this seems ...

"driznardren, and this is firerunner" i reached out my hand to shake.

"fear, maybe not you, but there are some , thats why a spell of invisibility comes in handy, and yes i am bored. another reason is that i need to ...

"i serve no god, exactaly, i am not exactally a creature of chaos, i just like to watch it happen, i may be underestimating my companion, but who knows what ...

"first i am no servant of lolth,although i guess you could still call me a creature of chaos, second you have no idea of what i am capable of, third ...

"hmmm.... a little less freindly than i would expect after helping you and your group if you can call it that, wtih those Djinn" driznardren stated not caring or not ...

yes free writing is the solution.